The Spirit Within
Chapter: 1 The Beginning
I lay there. Silent, Calm. I here voices but can't make out who's speaking them. I stay perfeclty still. Then brightness. ( a year earlier) I open my big lime green eyes to see the bright world. I look to
my right and I see this gorgeous, grey face with pure blue eyes. She was smiling widley at me, like I had somthing on my face. I look cross eyed at my nose to make sure there was nothing there , and then I look up and see that she's laughing at me. Frustrated I try to speak but nothing comes out. Then the brightness is blocked from my eyesight and I see to my left this buff, unusual wolf. He had cheek fur that hung longer then normal cheek fur. He had this unusual mohawk looking thing on his head and I thought it was funny so I smiled widly at him. He laughed. Out of no where this loud, obnoxious sound broke the scilence, I was hungry. I tryed to get up and then suddenly feel this huge paw help me up. I'm on my feet but scared to move. As I take a step foward I fall. Upset I start to cry. I feel this slimey wet thing touch the tip of my nose. That thing gave me the confidence to keep going. I stood up once again. I step forward. To my surprise I don't fall. I take another, then another, and before you know it I'm running to the same wolf that stared into my lime grean eyes. I plung on her and start to nurse. When I'm finally done I look strait into my gorgeous mothers blue eyes once more, I here her say,''I think we will call you... Layla.'' Thats all I heard before I fell into a deep sleep.
(4 mothins Later) Layla: ''But mom I want to go hang out with Dammain!! Not go to some stupid wolf meeting!'' Ebony: ''Well I'm sorry honey, but you'r the alfa males daughter, and you must attend the Wolf pack meeting.'' As I stared into my mothers beautiful blue eyes, mine turned red. I was furious! Dammeian was not part of the pack but he was cute, charming, and handsome. I was falling in love with him. Even though I was 4 months old I still love him and he loves me for who I am, not because I'm the alfa males daughter of the tougest pack on our turf. So I sit there, watching my mom get ready for the meeting. Ebony:'' Arnt you going to get ready for the meeting?'' Layla: ''No'' Ebony: ''I know your upset with me darling but please understand this. When I was young I LOVED this male wolf named steel. I loved him so much cause of his charm, cuteness, and how handsome he was. I loved him so much I ignored my mothers stories and advice and I ran away from home one night. I was furious for what my mother said to me.'' Layla:''What did she say?'' Ebony:''She said that I need to leave steel and never see him again.'' I was shocked. I started to understand what my mother was saying to me. I look down to think about what she was saying. I looked up and started to cry Ebony:''Oh sweetie it's ok!'' She ran to me and hugged me with her paws. She kept telling me It's going to be alright. As I sit there. Crying. I was thinking. It's time for me to leave the den. Tonight. To Be continued.
Spirit Within
Chapter: 1 The Beginning Part 2
I got ready for the meeting. Me and my mom walked side to side down a row of many different kinds of wolves. There was young wolves, some near my age. There were old wolves, so old they looked as if they didn't have much time left here on mother earth. I walked to the very end and went to my place and sat. The meeting began. Conal: ''Where are the hunting groups Adolfo?'' Adolfo: ''They have not returned Conal.'' Conal: ''You there! Go out and search for the group!'' Random wolf: ''Yes sir!'' Adolfo: '' Conal we need more food, what do we do? The hunting groups have been missing for quit a while...we can't just keep sending our men out to search for them. Were going to run out of men and not enough to protect the pack.'' I could tell Adolfo was worried for the pack, but he kept his voice calm. Conal: ''Brother we can't leave them out there without us. Were are one and we don't leave any wolf behind.'' Adolfo nodded, Im sure he wanted to talk back but there is nothing he can do, my dad is the alfa male, even though Adolfo is his brother, he could get kicked out of the pack. Sadly my mother looked up at her mate with a worried expression. her sister was out there, with the hunting group. My father looked down. Conal: ''Dear.....'' I looked up at him wondering why he did not finish. I noticed his ear was facing the dark woods. All I could see was what the moonlight touch before it met the darkened woods that I was forbidden to go near. I listened as well. I could here cries for help and howling from a far. Just then the hunting group sprinted out of the woods. They were a blure from where I was standing but I caught a glance of my aunt. She was leading them back to saftly. Right behind them were some odd style of wolves. They stood up right when they were standing. When they ran they had this nasty arch to their back. You could see their ribs and their bones like they haven't eaten in days.
They were running strait towards our pack! My heart was beating so fast It felt like it was going to come out of my chest. I wasn't scarred I harldy ever am....I was ready to defend my pack. But before
I could get a good attack in my mother came and told me to hurry and follow her. I asked her,''Mother what about father!'' Tears rolling down mine and her's faces as we took our cave path to the other side of the woods. Ebony: ''He'll be alright!'' I stopped just to make sure everything was going ok. I looked back at the pack to see where my dad was. I couldn't see him! Everything was a blur! I looked everywhere. But then! I saw a flash of green go by a werewolf and bite his neck. The bite was so strong my dad bit into the tough rotted fur and got to the jugular. Blood pored out of the werewolves neck and he fell to the ground. I cheered to see he was alright. But then my mother did not notice I had stopped and she came back to get me. Right when we turned around I heard a familer cry for help. Was it my dad?!
Ok here are Chapter 1 Part 1 and Chapter 1 Part 2. I hope you guys like it! :)
PS - I Don't know why I put chapter one part 1 in here but oh well. :)

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